tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184439531856160941.post6191907779986990069..comments2023-07-14T10:11:51.875-04:00Comments on It's a part of my life: Toastmasters International - First Speechnastyushcahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06451272867739294620noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184439531856160941.post-17843629741966086082011-08-31T13:49:33.019-04:002011-08-31T13:49:33.019-04:00Nastyushka,
Congrats! To me your speech sounds li...Nastyushka,<br /><br />Congrats! To me your speech sounds like a very successful start. Especially love the joke about the 1st marriage :) Pretty sure your audience didn't get bored and now everybody is looking forward to your next speech. So am I!twelve-orangesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184439531856160941.post-12721337105935074102011-08-31T10:54:24.790-04:002011-08-31T10:54:24.790-04:00Thanks for the comment!
I totally agree with the ...Thanks for the comment!<br /><br />I totally agree with the ending issue being there - I have never been good at endings! Will try to improve.<br /><br />PS Do you happen to know how to leave comments in your own blog?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7184439531856160941.post-21462799267953290532011-08-31T10:01:00.027-04:002011-08-31T10:01:00.027-04:00nice speech, nice idea - the theme of twos woven t...nice speech, nice idea - the theme of twos woven throughout your speech, touching every aspect of your life - or at least every aspect you decided to share :)<br /><br />if you're still keen on higher-level feedback as you indicated yesterday, I'd say the ending needs to a bit more work. Right now it feels like the speech is a bit hanging without a conclusion.<br /><br />But overall - Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com